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“Five Tips for a More Marketable Children’s Picture Book Manuscript,”
by Mayra Calvani
The
world of children’s picture book publishing is extremely competitive.
If you’re an aspiring children’s author, you need to make sure your
manuscript is in excellent shape and has all the elements editors and
agents look for before you begin the submission process.
Here are five tips to make your picture book manuscript more marketable:
Start right with the problem.
Many
times beginner writers begin a picture book with backstory. It’s okay
to have this backstory in the first draft, but be sure to get rid of it
when you edit. Backstory is unnecessary 90% of the time and it only
serves to slow down the beginning of a story, making it weaker. You want
to grab the reader right from the start. So don’t be afraid to begin
your story at the heart of the problem. It’s okay to set the stage with a
sentence or two—but no more!
Have a protagonist readers can relate to.
Generally,
children like to listen to stories about other children or animals with
children’s characteristics. They don’t want to hear about a grandma or
grandpa looking back to the time when they were young. Create characters
kids can identify with. When readers can identify with the protagonist,
they are drawn into the story and become emotionally involved with it.
Make sure the problem fits the age group.
Be
sure your protagonist is facing a problem young readers can relate to.
If they can’t relate to it, they won’t care. Losing a toy, being lost,
having a tooth pulled out, going to the hairdresser for the first time,
sibling jealousy, planning a first party, being afraid of monsters...
these are all situations kids can identify with. Yes, these subjects
have already been done a million times, but it’s all about the angle. By
creating a new angle about a familiar topic, you can give your story a
fresh and original slant.
Add rising action.
Rising action
creates tension—the good stuff that keeps readers glued to the story,
turning pages. After you have created the first big problem for the
protagonist, and as he tries to solve it, toss a couple more obstacles
into his path to make readers wonder what’s going to happen next. The
more readers care about the character’s predicament, the more compelling
they’ll find the story.
Leave them with a punch.
Endings
are always important, no matter what the genre. But they’re especially
important in picture books. Once the protagonist solves the problem and
everything falls into place, you must find a way to make the ending
memorable. This can be achieved by adding an unexpected twist or by
having the character say or do something witty. At the same time, it
must feel natural, a perfect and logical progression that has evolved
organically with the story. This can be hard to achieve. Try different
possibilities until you get that “Aha!” feeling. Don’t be afraid to come
up with crazy, over-the-top ideas while you brainstorm.
Keeping
these tips in mind when creating your children’s stories will help you
make them more marketable and appealing to editors and agents. Like with
any craft, writing for children is a never-ending learning process. I
hope you’ll keep at it and enjoy the journey.
